Liam
Liam I needed to say
I love watching you grow.
Each day you grow physically and mentally,
Which helps me realize
How precious each person’s life is.
Liam I needed to say
Your hugs could heal a broken heart.
The smell of baby shampoo on your neck after a bubble bath,
And the way you run your fingers through my hair.
Liam I needed to say
You’re truly a blessing.
When I watch you
Run
And play
And fall asleep,
It always improves my day.
Liam I needed to say.
do you think I need to add more? I feel it's a little short.
Does it bother you that the end rhymes?
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add a little more detail and no i didnt relize it till you pointed it out and awwwwwwwwwwww sooooooooooo cute
ReplyDeleteit was amazing i said aww the whole time i read itlol its good and its awesome that it actually ryhmes it has a great flow....
ReplyDeleteDo you guys get that it's my brother or should I mention that somewhere so people don't think i have a kid?
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