Thursday, December 10, 2009

A time my world changed V1

Caffeine

I’ll always love
That little green can.
The spray of the opening.
The cool of the liquid.
That first
Sip.
The bubbles traveling down my throat like water through a dam.
Don’t drink too fast.
Savor it.
The addiction.
An unforgettable beauty.
That of a dry lake
Or canvas unpainted.
Waiting for fulfillment.
Waiting for someone to come along and-
Addiction.
The addiction.
Mountain Dew.


What do you think I should add?
Did you like it? why?

1 comment:

  1. loved it... because it was really suspenseful um to add nothing i can think of

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